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Welcome Fall

Upon the breeze, a freshness. With a hint of chill. A welcome change from Summer, across my window sill. Comfort food upon the table, set to cool, an apple pie. Welcome Fall, to my home, where you'll hear contented sighs.
For the contest; Fall, Your Choice sponsored by Brian Strand Placement: 3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/25/2011 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fall Your Choice" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2011 12:22:00 AM
Great writing about the changing of the season. Today the first day of fall was the warmest day this year here. We had a cool summer. Hope it means we're going to have a long nice fall. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:02:00 PM
This poem conjurs up all the wonderful senses of autumn. Congrats on your deserving win Paula.
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:00:00 PM
Nice one, Paula. Congrats on your win! Kim
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Date: 9/23/2011 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Paula. Awesome write. Nice going. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:57:00 AM
Liked this a lot Paula. Congratulations
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Date: 9/19/2011 5:37:00 PM
good luck in the contest p.d.
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:30:00 PM
This is quite the incredible write! I really enjoyed the line, "With a hint of chill" that is certainly the calling of the Fall! Wonderful poem Paula!!
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:28:00 PM
lovely entry, best of luck in the contest
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