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Weeping Willow

Mom sure loved willow switches. Those willows never wore out, she’d make them sing forever. Worse, I had to pick them out. I needed to change some things, mom did not ask for this mess. Time for me to grow up some. My first switch, too small. At thirteen and six foot tall, I then tore down half a tree. “No more whippings for me mom!” Mom cried tears of joy! For the TREES EVERYWHERE contest entered by John Trusty. A true story and I made sure to never make my mother cry again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/11/2012 5:56:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 3/26/2012 10:36:00 AM
I really like this poem about a loving son. My sons still make me cry, but usually out of happiness. Well written - enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/22/2012 5:46:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one this eve..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:39:00 AM
Good work, luck in contest and take care of your mother. -oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/14/2012 6:04:00 PM
Lovely set Dodoitsu John, good luvk in the contest, love Elizabeth
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