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Wedding Rehearsal

Preacher, flowers, dresses, cake
Husband, wife, bouquets, music
Maid of Honor, Best Man, rings
Rehearsal dinner

Ill-fitting tux, bad weather
Parents, in-laws arguing
Photographer a no-show
Should have just eloped


By: Shani Fassbender

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/17/2011 10:25:00 PM This one is so cool!! Congratulations on a very well deserved win. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/17/2011 5:27:00 PM LOL My wedding was a kinda dud too! My Mom almost didn't get there, on purpose! Then SHE danced the first dance?? Then the groom went and got stoned in the parking lot??? with my brother?? YUP and when we got to the Plaza in NY the door to our room would not open [think I can't take a hint???] had to get a locksmith in? Congrad's Shay NEE Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/17/2011 5:21:00 PM Shani! Great entry. Congratulations on your poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/17/2011 1:57:00 PM Shani, Congratulations on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/17/2011 1:09:00 PM Congrats Shani on your amazing win in Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem luv.. enjoy another treasured win and u are very welcome for the blog acknowledgment today . u earned this my friend for quality poetry ... Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/17/2011 12:42:00 PM Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Shani. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/17/2011 11:54:00 AM Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Shani Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/23/2011 8:42:00 PM Shani, lol.. yes sounds perfect and expensive.... I had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/23/2011 6:22:00 PM The first verse is serious, but the second one made me laugh, Shani! People should save themselves the hassle of weddings and consider eloping. LOL Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/23/2011 6:01:00 PM wonderful humor here. I love it. Login to Reply