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Wearied Friend

Tis weary when thoughts thunder in looped replay Would it not be better if they just went away? Thy storms have brewed and built for weeks Plummeting with lamenting opinions that reek Bitter these pills now thou hast taken in turns Rancorous choices thou doth seek now to spurn Twas it the dawning of seen darkness ahead Or simply lost sleep tossing and turning in bed? Calamity, greets, knocking loud at thy door Greed, once friend, here to settle old scores Alas I, true friend, will shed forth some light Pay off thy debtors and lessen thy plight 2/3/13 All rights reserved

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Date: 4/24/2013 3:55:00 PM
Peace be unto those who cast out rays of light. And catch dark stars deep in the gloom and lesson others plight. I see you won on this one. Love it! Thanks for fishn'. Peace. :)
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Date: 2/18/2013 12:23:00 AM
Congrats on the win. This one towers over most of others:) Jag
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Date: 2/17/2013 9:31:00 PM
Debra, stopping by to enjoy all of Seren's "Shaft of light " winners.. Congratulations with your awesome poem. xox~ PD
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Date: 2/17/2013 9:36:00 AM
You should enter into the the and thou contest as well and pick up another win with this splendid piece.
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Date: 2/17/2013 6:50:00 AM
very nicely penned Debra......congrats on your win
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Date: 2/17/2013 2:43:00 AM
a great write, congratulations....
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:51:00 PM
great entry Debra, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 2/16/2013 9:17:00 PM
Wonderful poem...congratulations
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Date: 2/16/2013 7:37:00 PM
Well done Debra, thank you...... Seren
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Date: 2/6/2013 4:31:00 PM
Between shades of gray and hidden dismay. The truth lingers gently till it gets it's way. Sky's that are clear can remove the fear. But gently, the rain washes away the tear. :)
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Date: 2/4/2013 9:09:00 AM
Wow Debra, this is so poetic, its got to be the best of yours i've ever read... awesome this is...
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Date: 2/4/2013 6:53:00 AM
A lovely poem Debra, I'm enjoying it. - Thank you! - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/3/2013 8:37:00 PM
Great write Deb ... Seren
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Date: 2/3/2013 7:54:00 PM
This is a gift, a magnificent write my friend! You have written a tremendous poem, one of great fascination! You have painted a grand image with this lovely piece! What a pleasurable poem, Great Work!!
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