We Still Laugh About It Today

When she walked she had a way of swaying her hips
Red-haired and freckled with Carly Simon lips
Hormones raging at twelve and she was fourteen
To this boy she looked like a magazine queen
"Why you gotta-go?" she pouts, "What's the big rush?"
Have you ever kissed a girl?" she asked with a blush
'Sh-sh-sure I've kissed girls, a whole bunch!', I lied
"My mama's still home so we better go hide"

Guiding sweaty hands to a hot laundry room
(Faint scent of hairspray, a wisp of perfume)
She reached out soft fingers and tickled my cheeks
Candy lipstick I tasted; she whispered "You're sweet"

...This sonnet concludes with an ironic twister
I got my first kiss from my future step-sister
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/26/2012 11:19:00 AM
Truly? Yes or no, it's a winner. love, Kathy
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Date: 8/23/2012 6:15:00 PM
LOL For me for originality alone this would have been higher [but I have always known YOU are a true original!] Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 8/22/2012 12:58:00 PM
Terrific title. Congratulations on a wonderful poem. Funny how life turns out sometimes.
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Date: 8/22/2012 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2012 3:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win liked it first time xx
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:18:00 AM
Oh No! Great write! To me this one is a winner.
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:00:00 AM
You naughty boy, does your brother know?
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Date: 8/18/2012 6:41:00 AM
Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this morning..I bet she is still a beauty..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 8/17/2012 11:07:00 AM
Wow at least you weren't blood brother and sister. great write xx
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Date: 8/17/2012 9:33:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading so many diverse poems this morning Tim. I am very happy to have been able to read yours and wish you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing your well written poetry. Have a very beautiful and joyful weekend. Love, Carol
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