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We Never said Good Bye

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We Never said Good Bye

I love you in spring… 
When the sun kiss the dew upon virgin grass
When robins build their nests high up in tall trees  
And soft rain quenches the thirst of the rich, black earth
Making music with watering cans on the patio floor
That lulled us into slumber on lazy Sunday afternoons

I love you in summer…
When surf dances atop playful, swelling waves
Its wild and loud roars drowns out carefree laughter
And mimicks our frolicking beneath the blazing sun
Inviting us to share warm nights beneath dazzling stars
Wrapped as one, gazing the moon in the southern sky

I love you in autumn…
When brisk winds hurry to undress proud elms
When casual walks and a fire signals the end of day
In love, we never notice the fading sun light
Then comes the day when ‘jealous fate’ interferes
And time swallows the many years we’ve been apart

Soon, winter comes and I will love you still…
When frigid weather lingers long and chills the bones
Can lovers’ hearts call through corridors of time?
Perhaps, deepest love dissolves invisible walls?
At last, you’ll find me here, somewhere in between
And who knows, it may be like we never said good bye
~*~

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  1. Date: 6/2/2013 6:22:00 AM
    Very good poem. Well done

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 4:14:00 PM
    As seasons follow seasons so did life allow you and I to take paths that insured reunion later on. As hearts and souls seek solace after separation so did destiny lead us to those quiet times that brought our love to want to live again. ...... Beautiful Writing, sweet poetess, simply beautiful..... Jake

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    Date: 11/26/2012 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your lovely comment, Jake? Is that your real name? I'm glad this stirred your soul...I love this too. Reading some of yours I find that I like your style of writing...and incidentally, you write beautiul pieces. I hope you and yours had a great Thanksgiving Holiday! Annalise
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 7:38:00 AM
    SO Happy to be here again reading your wonderful heart through deep and sentimental words..Charma

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 3:05:00 PM
    Your imagery is magnificent here, Annalise. I could see you enjoying these romantic outcomes in all the seasons. It's interesting how you related autumn as the season when "jealous fate interfered" and he was taken from you. It's a time when many things die. But it's your hope to meet again on the other side that makes this poem so special to me. Excellent, Annalise! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 5:03:00 AM
    I know that I read this one and commented but my comment is not here..Enjoyed reading very much..Descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 10:04:00 AM
    Each season a treat to read. So full of the lovely images you paint with your pen. Truly a poetic work of art!

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 12:54:00 PM
    Wow, I love this Annalise especially the ending :) stunning piece, love Wilma

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 8:26:00 AM
    A beautiful write Annalise , thank you Declan xxx

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:49:00 PM
    Anna, can we out run love... i can't seem to catch up.. I like the way you ended your poem... great expression on the longing goodbye.. enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:47:00 PM
    I agree with everything Vienna has said just below. Good write Annalise.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:40:00 PM
    Totally awesome Annalise, hanging on every word, you took your pen for a smooth ride all the way home, xxxxvie

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:21:00 PM
    I loved your reminisce and these lines particularly: I loved you in autumn… When brisk winds hurried to undress proud elms When casual walks and a fire signaled the end of day In love, we never noticed the fading sun light Beautiful, Brenda : )

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:07:00 PM
    I really felt your emotion, the way you feel.