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We Care

In extreme mob, with
suspiration and
We are here to wipe
off, because we

For the pain and
worries that may
turn you sear,
Don’t worry, we are
here to aplomb, say
we care,

In trouble and in
depressive delusion
Our smile, will
vanish all, say we

You may unaware and
in fear,
No matter, how it
goes on, listen we

For ailment to
sorrow and grief
Spell the right,
leave us to say we

In edgy situation,
you won’t able to
We whisper heart to
heart, see we care,

Each remedy to final
intervention till
you wear,
We won’t leave you
alone, feel we care,

And until you faith,
contented and swear,
We keep on efforts,
see we care.

Shahid Hussain

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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:53:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your work..I like the repeat phrase of "we care"...I have tried to write a few Ghazal and they are not that easy..Sara

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 9:43:00 PM
    you have written a good poem , enjoyed ...

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 5:41:00 AM
    Excellent rhyming, inspiring poem! Way to go!

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 6:21:00 AM
    Interesting way to present what traditionally is presented in couplets. So as a contemporary ghazal you have abandoned all but the repeated phrase, the radeef [we care] interesting. Light & love

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Shahid, well done ! - // Anne-Lise :)