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We All Feel Lonely Like Night

Countertops like held hands support slowly separated spaces pulling away from unkept passion your lips speak loves last grace Has desire ever been so elusive? she dances in my fireplace she drips from my shower-head only to fall into ashes and retreat from my lonesome bed her touch like moments past is color fading from my face what once was there is gone moving farther from the home i must dwell Decorations cover the hole in my wall filled with hollow expectations the furniture like pressed bodies warms icy abandonment my floor is our humanity and my countertops our innocent attempt at nirvana

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/2/2011 6:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Julian. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Julian. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 11:47:00 PM
what a fascinating and wonderfully penned write you have composed here. the word choice was exquisite, the images beautiful, this was a feature well deserved. congrats. -madison
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Date: 3/11/2011 10:56:00 PM
...really good, good thing there was a 0 next to the how many views always like to read peoples poem that don't get read, and people are missing a good one. enjoyed your write :)
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