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Waterfall Haiku

Blue moon lights the falls
cool vapors fill the night air
shushing me to sleep

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  1. Date: 10/27/2009 1:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest!

  1. Date: 10/24/2009 8:25:00 PM
    Dear Trudy, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Raul's Contest What an Excellent Haiku It's "Shushing me to sleep" also Awesome Write Thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments ALWAYS YOURS.... HG

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 4:39:00 AM
    Congratulations, Trudy, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

  1. Date: 10/21/2009 6:56:00 PM
    congrats! Trudy! I really enjoyed this fine haiku! jim

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 10:03:00 AM
    Very nice...Congratulations on win...Glad I didn't have to judge...Marty

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 8:03:00 AM
    I could hear the soothing sounds of those falls--what a soothing write! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 12:48:00 AM
    Nice one Trudy.Rgds Brian & thank you for your kind words today.

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 10:03:00 PM
    Blue vapors...shushing me to sleep. Very impressive! I must say. FELICITATIONS! on your win.

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 8:38:00 PM
    This a very lovely read, Congrats on your sucess in Raul's contest :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 4:35:00 PM
    Nothing like the sounds of a water fall, good write....thanks for the congrats on my poem..Danny

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 4:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on placing in Raul's contest, Trudy. Well deserved! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 2:22:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in the contest Trudy.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 11:34:00 PM
    Beautiful haiku, Trudy! Congratulations! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 8:17:00 PM
    Dear Trudy, Congratulations on your beautiful Haiku win. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 5:43:00 PM
    Congratulations on your Win with this beautiful Haiku, Trudy! It paints such a lovely image! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 4:44:00 PM
    There is a soft, gentle feel to this lovely poem! Congratulations on your win, Trudy!! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 3:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Trudy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 2:41:00 PM
    Trudy, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 1:51:00 PM
    Delightful Haiku Trudy, i can picture me in a hammock in your poem >> best of luck in the contest >> James

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 12:26:00 PM
    Beautiful Haiku Trudy. Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol