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Water Travel

‘Waves! Big waves!’ a boy yelled. Riding hide, the launch heaved and rolled, engine shattering, its sound changing, upon salty water we traveled. ‘Waves! Big waves!’ a lady shrieked, captain’s compass lost unwanted, passengers screaming, launch was wobbling, upon salty water we traveled. ‘Waves! Big waves!’ an old man yelped, brutal waves smashing, anxious passengers, water overlapping, upon salty water we traveled. ‘Waves! Big waves!’ we all squealed, launch’s engine halted, passengers’ life jackets distributed, upon salty water we traveled. ‘Waves! Big waves!’ we all prayed, passengers trembling, wetted and paled, the launch arrived safe and sound, upon salty water we traveled. This poem is an excerpt from the book: Whisper of Life Read more writings of Cesar @ http://www.cesargealogo.com

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Date: 1/15/2016 8:16:00 PM
cESAR, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 8/6/2011 10:51:00 PM
congrats on being featured i loved it awsome work
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Cesar. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congrats Cesar on "Water Travel" being featured. Vince
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Cesar. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2011 7:10:00 PM
congrats cesar on your featured poem this week on PS.. a great one to share with us with luv..
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Date: 12/5/2010 2:26:00 AM
Loved the adventure!
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Date: 11/30/2010 6:45:00 AM
Yes I can relate to the expression Waves! Big waves, very crerative piece of writing, cesar
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:05:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cesar. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:34:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight with its interesting theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and full of sharing with luv..
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