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Water & Ice

like blue tentacles
natures spinal chord of life
provides for us all

Written for Raul's Contest

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  1. Date: 12/25/2011 10:42:00 PM
    Michael, a wonderful haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 11:35:00 AM
    Awesome write (:

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 5:19:00 PM
    Interesting approach to the picture...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 12:42:00 PM
    Hey, Michael, how are you doing, have not heard from you in awhile. I was looking at the contests I entered and noticed there is one your sponsored, and it made me think, where is Michael, anyways, looking forward to reading more of your poetry soon, and hearing from you.. I really like this one you wrote for one of Raul's contest.. love constance

  1. Date: 4/15/2010 12:23:00 PM
    Truly your word's profound i love it, nice piece.

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 6:10:00 AM
    Sensational Haiku, dear Michael. A winner for sure! Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 4/6/2010 10:55:00 AM
    Intresting and a nice one.

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 12:54:00 PM
    very nice, Michael. I see it as all the river systems of the world! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 1:53:00 PM
    michael really loved this Haiku. thank you for your support. and how has things been?

  1. Date: 3/24/2010 12:47:00 AM
    Michael thanks for your much valued encouraging words today.Best wishes with your writing and your other projects.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 6:22:00 AM
    Great 2 see in the winner circle...Enjoyed the read

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 12:04:00 PM
    Congratulations Michael, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 3/5/2010 6:44:00 AM
    Congrats on the well-deserved win! Beautifully written

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 1:41:00 PM
    Very nice, Michael. congratulations to you!

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 9:50:00 AM
    A nice # 8 Michael. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 9:41:00 PM
    So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 7:39:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win,,,enjoyed....Marty

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 5:10:00 PM
    Congrats to you Michael on your win in this contest!

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 12:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, MJ! Enjoy your win! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 12:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on being in the winner's circle in Raul's contest Michael. Cascade is one of the only French words I know, which means "Waterfall" of course. Blessings, Connie