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Watching Waves

“WATCHING WAVES” Oceans whisper their whimsical waterfalls windblown, meandering the shorelines periphery washing gently on shimmering sea... oceans whisper their whimsical waterfalls wrapping, enfolding hues of blue crashing their whiteness, wrapping sand softly... oceans whisper their whimsical waterfalls undulating ,weightless when serene turbulent, riotous restless oft’ daunting... oceans whisper their whimsical waterfalls scenic seashells ingrained in sand tossed, transferred by gentle tides oceans whisper their whimsical waterfalls... Copyright© 2013-Kim van

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Shining Bright

Date: 4/19/2013 3:33:00 PM

a Geat, Peaceful write.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 4/14/2013 7:05:00 PM

Great poetic lines which meld with ease. Nice work, homegirl. You've got the gift. I like your style - a lot. :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/14/2013 7:50:00 AM

Kim, thank you for this peaceful write...jimbo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2013 10:25:00 PM

This is wonderful Kim. Enjoyed stopping by this evening. Thank you for sharing, ~Always & Forever *LINDA

David Williams

Date: 4/12/2013 2:29:00 PM

Kim, this is full of poetic alliteration which I think flows so well, very well done and I don't think there is a single soul here who is poetically uneducated, congrats on joining me in the bar none group....David