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Watching a Sunset 1

Watching a Sunset

Sunset in the sky, in colorful splendor
Sunset of life, a remembrance of blunders
Sunset of love, a matter of dejection 
As love once was of unstinted affection.

A play of oranges, golds and reds in  sky
As a posse of thoughts are passing me by.
Digressing  to dream of a golden mountain
And a falling sun filtering through fountains

I  flit back to view the spectacle in the sky
Now, a poetic play of hues as, home, birds fly.

For Skat's contest on 27/6/2013

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 11:07:00 AM
    Very well done... Congratulations on your win.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Jag, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 7:11:00 PM
    May the moon set on many more sunsets.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 5:11:00 PM
    Take a peek at my fictitious sunset, friend...It hit 100 degrees F AGAIN today...I feel as tho I live in the Sahara! gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 2:52:00 PM
    Beautiful view of a sunset Jag; wonderful entry for the contest; Francine will love it! LIzzie

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:03:00 AM
    Hi Jag great write love it paints a beautiful sunset, good luck in the comp, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 8:45:00 PM
    Nicely described, Jag. Hey, long time no see!!

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 3:19:00 AM
    Jag, this is lovely,, a picture in a picture,,, good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 2:17:00 PM
    This is the only poem that I will have time to read this weekend...working long hours...I will be savoring the intense images of colour and emotion...A new favorite for my collection! It is a beauty! I also notice that your rhyme does not sound forced or unnatural which is often hard for poets to do...Glad you shared this with your fellow poets, Jaggy! Awesome job! gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 12:31:00 PM
    Jag, you brought some magical imagery across in this write of yours. All the best for the contest :) Wilma

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 10:29:00 AM
    these lines will leave the readers to imagine what is there beyond a sunset that promises a thousand things... good work, jag! good luck and huggs! :)

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 4:44:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 1:57:00 PM
    many splendid facets of sunsets and colors Jag.. u always write so intensely and beautifully with expressions.. best wishes luv as I hope u check out my contest just posted today..luv..

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 12:16:00 PM
    Happy weekend to you Jag. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and the best to you in Francine's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 9:50:00 AM
    great view,S.J,GREAT VIEW