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Watching a Storm through a Window

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Watching a Storm through a Window

Haze and gray clouds maze down and shroud 
the sky; as rain falls thunder claps cry aloud.
And upon the porch, a slippery plank lie;
a dangerous fate; a predestined time.
But then its to late you trip and commence 
shattering glass fragments.
Slit wrists and bloody fingertips
drenched in soggy wine drips
as you slip to the floor; drift off and snore.
Blood stains and gore as you
bleed out and breathe out no more; 
drift on to explore; ride off on the storm.

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  1. Date: 5/5/2009 9:09:00 AM
    Great piece!...sounds gloomy but original...

  1. Date: 4/26/2009 12:01:00 PM
    A great is grasping and potent..Thank you for your comment... Always, Farah

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 8:53:00 AM
    There is so power in your write ... so much vision of the beat poets, and yet so original, I love them.