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was it something I said

Your no use to me I told you so
you irritate and annoy me
but where will you go?

your a nasty quarrelsome type
I know what you are
and I'm always right

and by the way
your sexless in bed
dont know whats going on
in your head!

I've shouted at you I know it's true
cant you see what you do to me,
just be quiet and dont be cold
and I might let you keep 
that band of gold!.

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  1. Date: 6/17/2010 1:16:00 PM
    Sounds like a stern warning to some one.....Sound like you are getting short change. Love Roger x

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 8:05:00 PM
    Grand words, but between the lines, I read pain.... and thanks for your comments on my poetry

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 6:35:00 AM
    Well, in spite of bed problems, a person must have a friend in his/her mate. Sounds like this person has neither. Good write.Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 1:17:00 PM
    Good poem, the 2 of mine you left comments on I wrote many years ago when I was in a bad place. I'm now with the most beautiful woman in the world who I love with all my heart and she loves me more than I have ever been loved.