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Warning: Dirty Senyru

at doctor's office Virgin magazine waits to be fingered 12/1/11

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/10/2012 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations Susan, a well deserved win love xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/9/2012 3:36:00 PM

A well deserved win poem, congratulations. -A poem to be proud of, very well written B.E.S. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/9/2012 2:51:00 PM

Black, congratulations with your awesome win..in the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD

Skat A

Date: 12/9/2012 2:25:00 PM

Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/5/2011 4:25:00 PM

so the corners aren't dog eared in the least.... this is funny, Susan

David Williams

Date: 12/5/2011 9:53:00 AM

Susan ha ha ha this is great, though in our doctor's all of the virgins are well thumbed...oops...well you know what i mean.. many thanks for your kind words and yes it's true..David

Tony Lane

Date: 12/2/2011 7:14:00 AM

I'm glad that I didn't say that. It was funny though.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2011 6:45:00 AM

Hands Susan hand sanitizer. What a hoot you are. Great Senryu. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2011 10:29:00 PM

hahaha, I LOVE this, SUSAN. wow,what a great modern senryu!!! (don't capitalize virgin though since it's like a haiku that way). Is this for any contest. It's super clever.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/1/2011 6:03:00 PM

O, that's hilarious Susan! Amazing punch at the end! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2011 4:19:00 PM

Cute one..Sara