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warning: dirty senyru

at doctor's office
Virgin magazine waits
to be fingered


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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:19:00 AM
    Congratulations Susan, a well deserved win love xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 12:24:00 AM
    Thanks for the warning...... Despite of that.......... this one causes a huge smile on my face.... Felicitations :+) Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:36:00 PM
    A well deserved win poem, congratulations. -A poem to be proud of, very well written B.E.S. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:51:00 PM
    Black, congratulations with your awesome the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:25:00 PM
    Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 10:19:00 PM
    Hehe! Whoa, I haven't seen a senryu like this one before. Great, witty play on kind of senryu for sure lol. Susan, I saw your comment on my "Mega-Block" poem. I assure you that I was never a blocker until now. I didn't know wot else to do, because the person has so many alt-accounts, and I am very tired of going through that many personal attacks. Yes, I am thick-skinned, but the obsessive behaviour finally really ticked me off.

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 4:25:00 PM
    so the corners aren't dog eared in the least.... this is funny, Susan

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 9:53:00 AM
    Susan ha ha ha this is great, though in our doctor's all of the virgins are well thumbed...oops...well you know what i mean.. many thanks for your kind words and yes it's true..David

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 7:14:00 AM
    I'm glad that I didn't say that. It was funny though.

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 6:45:00 AM
    Hands Susan hand sanitizer. What a hoot you are. Great Senryu. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 10:29:00 PM
    hahaha, I LOVE this, SUSAN. wow,what a great modern senryu!!! (don't capitalize virgin though since it's like a haiku that way). Is this for any contest. It's super clever.

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 6:03:00 PM
    O, that's hilarious Susan! Amazing punch at the end! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 4:19:00 PM
    Cute one..Sara