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Warm Gold Nectar Soothes

full moon basks in light reflecting the sun’s bright rays… illumination void of emotion the cratered face seems to stir… light lost as sun moves amber crescent hangs tip it an sip its Chablis… warm gold nectar soothes *Entry for Joe Maverick’s haiku contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/10/2012 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe's "Haiku Challenge" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2012 7:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning haiku.
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Date: 8/6/2012 2:47:00 PM
Awesome title line, Carolyn. congrats on this wonderful win. How are you feeling? I hope you are doing well right now. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/5/2012 3:17:00 PM
these are wonderful Carolyn, so awesome reading your poetry again.
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Date: 8/5/2012 2:15:00 PM
Carolyn, congrats on a wonderful win! I hope you are feeling the prayers and hugs being sent to you...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:12:00 PM
excellent, well done. Really enjoyed. Lee
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Date: 8/5/2012 11:44:00 AM
Carolyn congrats on your win, love it...David
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Date: 5/22/2012 1:32:00 AM
Check for typo in the penultimate line Carolym.'an' or 'and'?
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Date: 5/13/2012 2:06:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in these haiku Carolyn.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 5/12/2012 10:15:00 PM
What a wonderful write my friend! This poem is quite the honorable write peppered in with some charisma and happiness! Great Work!!
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