War Time Senryu

Cloud of discontent hangs over innocent child... lucky are those dead. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Bl Devnath

Date: 11/22/2012 8:12:00 AM

Hay, my friend, it's one of absolute truth of life of war. Children I always love with my true heart. I will be very lucky, if God takes my life by giving all lives to the Children of this World. We are still failed to love them in many ways. Yours are always genius, I feel. You show one but touch the other, it's your excellent style of writing. Thanks always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/20/2012 9:11:00 AM

very intense harry but you are intense me thinks xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 10:39:00 PM

oh my, such intensity of words in this one, harry. One of your best for senryu! thanks for these new poems for me to see today. And yes, I am always worried for my waistline but my new way of eating that I blogged about last week is seeming to help!!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/19/2012 7:57:00 PM

what an image this one leaves the reader....powerful words!