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My eyes burn as i look at you with your snake tattoo, blue jeans, you make my heart thump a piece of me wants you to be mine As i put on my sun dress, i feel your eyes all over me like a bee to the honey, your sticky sweet all over me i know thats where you want to be A drunk love baby it's just you & me Whispers soft off the bitterness of your tounge your words are sharp, baby your breaking my heart A theif, a liar i can't live without you, I just forever want you, want you, want you....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/10/2012 11:50:00 PM
It reads like you have a crush on somebody? Ha,ha. Nice write.
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Date: 12/10/2012 3:38:00 PM
Tender piece on desire and wanting.. hugs form Santa Michael
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Date: 12/2/2012 10:05:00 AM
A blue - jeaned baby doll - something to think about. Nice work Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/1/2012 4:10:00 PM
A good and lovely poem Kerry. - Wishing you a relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/28/2012 6:40:00 AM
very provocative peace nice poem thankyou for comments on mine xx davidscott
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