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Her beauty wanes with elder moon’s timed curves, appalled Empty is she,once adored like porcelain doll For Susan's Time Contest

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  1. Date: 9/18/2012 5:53:00 AM
    Congrats, a very interesting poem, lots to think about here.

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:11:00 PM
    Poignant and descriptive. BIG congrats, Nette.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 2:54:00 PM
    Sad but sometimes true for those who put all their self worth in their exterior. An excellent write as always, Nette! Belated congrats...hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 8:08:00 PM
    Congrats on your win nette, love debra

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:22:00 PM
    Nette, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:23:00 PM
    Nette, congrats on your 2nd place win with this lovely couplet! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 4:12:00 PM
    Hats off to you Nette! Outstanding! Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 5:38:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Nette,,, xox~PD

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 5:04:00 PM
    Splendid and nice piece,Nette.Congratulations on your super win..

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Nice one Nette! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 8:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your smashing win nette xx

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 3:43:00 AM
    This is a top notch entry, Nette! The changes that time brings with itself wear in slowly.

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 8:18:00 AM
    Time is it the enemy or our friend? guess Time will tell. enjoyed this nette,

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 12:46:00 PM
    Sad realization that we as humans have to face isn't it..If one doesn't develope inner beauty, one is just last when the beauty fades and the wrinkles show up..Great work with great truth..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Wow, a great couplet here nette!love this!

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:10:00 AM
    Big write...A big win I believe. Thanks for your kind comments blessed love! Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 9:39:00 AM
    This is an elaborately constructed write, pieced together with forethought and much insight, I hope you don't feel this way my friend! You do see deep into things and are quite good and deducing the truth behind many hidden aspects of life! Even if they are so grandiose in feelings such as this, a flood of emotions can come from this poem of yours Nette! You are the master of such poetry, you write with great emotion in your writes, so filled with awe am I at times, bewildered with inspiration!

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    Date: 9/2/2012 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are the master of verse my friend! Great Work!!
  1. Date: 9/2/2012 9:02:00 AM
    well all can relate to these exquisite line Nette luv .. the mirror is removed as time goes by so as not to be reminded .. good luck luv .. all well with that Tsunami warning on your shores?