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Waning of Time

Her beauty wanes with elder moon’s timed curves, appalled Empty is she,once adored like porcelain doll For Susan's Time Contest

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Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/18/2012 5:53:00 AM

Congrats, a very interesting poem, lots to think about here.

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/8/2012 10:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 3:11:00 PM

Poignant and descriptive. BIG congrats, Nette.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/6/2012 2:54:00 PM

Sad but sometimes true for those who put all their self worth in their exterior. An excellent write as always, Nette! Belated congrats...hugs, Rhonda

Debra Falgout

Date: 9/5/2012 8:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win nette, love debra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:22:00 PM

Nette, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/5/2012 5:23:00 PM

Nette, congrats on your 2nd place win with this lovely couplet! Love, Kim

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/5/2012 4:12:00 PM

Hats off to you Nette! Outstanding! Cynthia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Skat A

Date: 9/4/2012 5:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win Nette,,, xox~PD

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/4/2012 5:04:00 PM

Splendid and nice piece,Nette.Congratulations on your super win..

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/4/2012 11:13:00 AM

Nice one Nette! Congrats on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/4/2012 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your smashing win nette xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/3/2012 8:18:00 AM

Time is it the enemy or our friend? guess Time will tell. enjoyed this nette,

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2012 12:46:00 PM

Sad realization that we as humans have to face isn't it..If one doesn't develope inner beauty, one is just last when the beauty fades and the wrinkles show up..Great work with great truth..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the stopping by...Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 9/2/2012 12:27:00 PM

Wow, a great couplet here nette!love this!

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/2/2012 11:10:00 AM

Big write...A big win I believe. Thanks for your kind comments Nette...one blessed love! Joy Wells

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/2/2012 9:39:00 AM

This is an elaborately constructed write, pieced together with forethought and much insight, I hope you don't feel this way my friend! You do see deep into things and are quite good and deducing the truth behind many hidden aspects of life! Even if they are so grandiose in feelings such as this, a flood of emotions can come from this poem of yours Nette! You are the master of such poetry, you write with great emotion in your writes, so filled with awe am I at times, bewildered with inspiration!

Russell Sivey
Date: 9/2/2012 9:40:00 AM

You are the master of verse my friend! Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2012 9:02:00 AM

well all can relate to these exquisite line Nette luv .. the mirror is removed as time goes by so as not to be reminded .. good luck luv .. all well with that Tsunami warning on your shores?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2012 5:03:00 AM

Lovely Nette. Another contest .... and you are ready ..... to conjure up beautiful poem .... lol - Have a beautiful Sunday. oxox love from Norway.

Cindy Cayton

Date: 9/2/2012 3:50:00 AM

This stirred me, very eloquent. Thank you for your very generous comment, always appreciated. Much Love, Cindy Lu