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Walking With You Tonight (poem /song) In my dreams tonight oh, baby I am walking with you on the clouds Holding me tight in your arms And I wish I will never wake up With your warm and loving touch We're dancing together in the starlight As we walk together in my dreams tonight I feel your love entirely on my being Your tenderness and sweet caress Getting me out from the darkness With all the loneliness I feel You wipe them all, my tears and fears I am walking with you tonight In my dreams I feel alright You’re releasing all my pains Allowing me to see a new sunlight As I walk lovingly with you tonight You’re giving me enough courage to go on In all my hopes and dreams I’m dancing with you baby in the starlight As I walk with you tonight We’re dancing together in the starlight As we walk together in my dreams tonight. Oct. 23,2012 Note: This song was composed but not entered in any contest before. I just wrote it for me & my loving granddad (musician) to put melody when we've time to be together. However, I decided to enter it now for Song Lyric Contest of my dear poet friend, Anne Currin. Thirteenth Place Contest: Song Lyrics Judged: 7/13/13 Sponsor: Poet Anne Currin

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Date: 7/18/2013 10:53:00 PM
Hi Leonora, , Anne, has nice taste ..... congrats with your Song Lyrics entry... love~ SKAT
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Date: 7/15/2013 10:06:00 AM
Lenora thank you for sharing your fabulous lyric. I hope you get to put it to music. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/14/2013 6:08:00 PM
:-) Hello my dearest sis... stopping by to say hi, and make sure you are doing well... I am glad Anne, enjoyed what you send her.... congrats... hugs and more hugs... love..LINDA
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Date: 7/14/2013 11:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/14/2013 8:15:00 AM
Leonora this is very beautiful and I love the sentiment behind it....congratulations
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Date: 7/14/2013 8:12:00 AM
Well done congratulations.
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:02:00 AM
Leonora, I'm glad to see this one on another winners' list. BIG congrats. It's precious.
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Date: 11/20/2012 10:47:00 AM
i can whistle a tune for this, that's the best i can do.. awesome poem, deserves being a song..........
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Date: 10/30/2012 12:40:00 PM
that's a beautiful and romantic expressed poem, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 10/24/2012 4:11:00 PM
gosh, it's so pretty, it sure seems like it belongs in the contest, Leonora. and gosh, I did not even know you had a contest going on with YOUR busy schedule!! wow!
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Date: 10/24/2012 10:49:00 AM
another great piece from you friend Norie...two thumbs up!!! I like it!! keep it up! mwuah!!!!!!!!!!!!!(^_^)
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Date: 10/24/2012 7:36:00 AM
A wonderful piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading today Leonora. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2012 9:32:00 PM
This is very, very beautiful, to walk with the one you love on the clouds. Thanks for sharing and good night. Lucilla
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Date: 10/23/2012 8:54:00 PM
stopping by to tell you good night Sisie-pooh.... nite nite....zzzzzzzzzzz... see you in the morning...PD
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2012 8:59:00 PM
good night sisie-pooh. thank you so much for reading my song.
Date: 10/23/2012 7:50:00 PM
This will make a lovely song, Leonora...the ending chorus is a knockout!...Might I suggest inserting the chorus between the 2nd and 3rd verse as well? - Tim
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2012 9:01:00 PM
Your suggestion is highly appreciated Tim. I did right away what you've suggested. thank you so much!
Date: 10/23/2012 6:28:00 PM
Lovely dreaming dance, you have a way with words, passionate and romantic.
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2012 9:02:00 PM
thank you so much Joann.
Date: 10/23/2012 5:16:00 PM
hi....Leo, how are you sisie-pooh,,,, I'm glad you have something new and dreamy for me to read.... Besides your soup-mail..LOL... which I will go and read in a few minutes..I had to attack this poem first.. About your poem: Only in a dram can we dream of love the way it should be and feel... you are a dreamer of light. your song is lovely, and you sure know how hold a hand.. always...your #1 fan..xox...pd
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2012 9:06:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear sisie. This is my first time that I'm quite serious to compose a song. The other one wasn't successful with the melody, lol. Hope this one will work. Million thanks! love, Leonora, your sisie-pooh.
Date: 10/23/2012 5:04:00 PM
I like this very much. My goal also is to be a songwriter. But I love poetry. Best of luck to you. Michael
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