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Walking with you

The icy wind blows through
blushing our cheeks,

Eyes stinging and watering,
and mouths tinted purple.

Snow flurries whirl around us
nipping at our ears;
making our breath white and heavy.

So, we pretend to smoke.

But wide grins give away our game
With hearts purging laughter,

We look long at each other,
Eyes glinting sincerely happy sighs.

City sidewalks stretching out
Before concrete winterlands,
And you and me walking,

Holding and swinging our hands.

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 6:47:00 AM
    When your muse leaves it is a sign that you are bored with YOUR BOX, the pattern of your life is too familiar, you might try going somewhere new, a small trip alone by car, a long trip by plane, OR do something othes have found stimulating which you have not done and thought YUCK..LOL..for me that would be like OPERA! LOL if millions of people love it and you haven't tried it try it! I always find sacred sites inspiring..actually there are sacred sites from the native americans all over the USA

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    Date: 12/15/2012 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    or great works of art or archetecture..or homes of famous people..hey sometimes reading another work can set you OFF [cause you want to agrue with them or sooth one much reads my Free Verse read some and read Phree's
  1. Date: 7/18/2012 6:04:00 PM
    Congrad's on all three of your entries winning through round one. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 8:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your three poems making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals . Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 8:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry x3 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Thvia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 4:13:00 PM
    This sure is very heartwarming-- lovely how you did that despite the cold winter in your poem :) enjoyed reading this carefree and heartfelt write-- made me smile, Thvia :) hugs -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 11:36:00 AM
    Many congrats on your feature this week - Janette

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 11:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Thvia. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 5:31:00 PM
    Congrats Thvia on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all my friend.. hope u have a very Happy Thanksgiving with luv..

  1. Date: 9/15/2010 6:41:00 PM
    Love the beauty of your words to describe such a cold day. I have memories of snow days like that. I don't really care for snow, lol, but love this piece. Monica

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 6:04:00 PM
    A surprising anticlimax to the crescendo of feelings ... edit the final "and" substitute a "the" and accentuate the meaning and purpose of hands with mystery ... just my way of messing with perfection, friends can do that.

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 4:30:00 AM
    I think all kids who are fortunate to have a cold winter have done what your words describe >> James

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 3:26:00 AM
    Awww this is a lovely poem Thvia a slice of a cold moment .. thanks for your kind comment on my poem love Jayne

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 1:12:00 PM
    very charming memories,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 11:47:00 AM
    sounds like fun to me...reminds me of waiting for the school bus with my siblings.