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Walk On By

life passes by
changes quickly like 
the green grass
and passes like 
a fading shadow

lifelight verse

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Amanda Vaughn

Date: 11/18/2008 5:58:00 AM

I like it...

Steve Malebranche

Date: 11/12/2008 9:39:00 AM

This is so true...we need to make every second count...

Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 11/10/2008 5:33:00 AM

Deneen. Lovely economy of words so beautifully crafted. Thanks for your comments on my poetry. I just learned last night that my ex-husband killled himself and today is so sad for me. And your words hit home just now...so true...so true. Patricia

Adell Foster

Date: 11/6/2008 7:01:00 PM

So very true are your words my friend. That is why it is important to make the best of the time we have and enjoy the fullnest there of. I thank you D-nyce for sharing the read and for your lovely comments concerning Intended's :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Mc Mc

Date: 11/6/2008 7:30:00 AM

HOW TRUE IT IS!! THIS COULD GO ON A MAGNET! TERRIFIC!! GEM!

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/5/2008 9:50:00 AM

I feel Kristin's comment more and more every day. Yet I am not quite where she is yet. Yes, well said, indeed it does. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/5/2008 3:21:00 AM

Yes it does, but there is only one moment, it is eternal. love Kristin

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/5/2008 2:23:00 AM

Isn't that the truth! Beautifully written and so poetic Deneen. Love, Nigel

Michael Torres

Date: 11/4/2008 11:02:00 PM

Very true and well thought off Deneen where have you been? Blessings to you my dear. Michael Torres

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/4/2008 9:00:00 PM

Deneen that sure is the truth - I learned a lot about life and time over the course of my life - Deneen would you please pray for me - God Bless, Michael

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