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Waiting In 1968

I'm waiting for you to admit just once that you have never really looked into my eyes or held my hand or touched my cheek I'm waiting for you to say just once that our friendship has made you happy or our thoughts shared or our dreams I'm waiting for you to ask just once for "the privilege of the next dance" instead of my opinion or my help I'm waiting for you to say just once "I love you"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/30/2012 10:29:00 AM
Touched me deeply... Sure know that feeling... thanks...
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:35:00 PM
Very simple, but eloquent and searing with honesty! Bravo!
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:47:00 AM
It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:33:00 AM
men huh..... hope he has said it after this poem, thanks for your comments David
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Date: 7/16/2011 6:01:00 AM
A problem we've all experienced - well said.
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