Waiting For Your Return

Im taking this day by day.
Is tomorrow going to be better than today?
I use to think that all was wrong but this will go for long.
When is he coming home?
We use to talk and laugh so much.
I just want u to hold me.
I miss that touch.
We went to school together and now we grown.
This will last for long. 
When is he coming home?
At first we had our ups and downs.
But we realize theres more smiles there than frowns.
When will the pain be gone?
This will last long.
When is he coming home?
We went through thick and thin together always having each other back.
You always no how to make me laugh.
My days have turned to months.
This will last long.
When is he coming home?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/24/2008 9:35:00 PM
that is all we can do, day by day, we have no control over what happens. this was a great poem. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2008 5:07:00 PM
Only time will tell my friend. Either you keep the patience, or move on.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2008 4:10:00 PM
this poem go out to everyone that has a man fighting in the war.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2008 2:30:00 PM
a wonderful touching poem
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter