Waiting For You

The daylight is dying
Twilight comes flying
Purple and crimson blaze in the sky;
The sun's in a rush
To part with a flush
And kiss the meadow good bye.

An hour for trysting
When you come unresisting
Precious and eager on hesitant feet;
Shadows disguise us
Rose scent to baptize us
Scenting our bed with odours so sweet.

We can't know the reason
Or the span of a season
But eternal the stars shine up above;
We never had sought it
We never had thought it
Were it not jeweled with the beauty of love.

But all is forgiven
By chance that has given
An hour for the transition of youth;
We never will know it
But our dream will now show it
Changing it all to astonishing truth.

The fireflies ignite you
My breath will delight you
Nothing will vex the passing of hours;
Come, I await you
Night is too late for you
Come while the dewdrops are kissing the flowers.

The wind of the night is
Fragrant with lilies
Touched by a moonbeam, kissed by the dew;
The garden lies breathless
Where love awaits deathless
Under the starlight, I'm waiting for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/20/2012 2:50:00 PM
I think it's all already been said... but, here goes. Scintillating! The cadence is designed to lull one to sleep, and your rhyming is absolute perfection! I am in awe... :))
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Date: 11/27/2011 10:53:00 AM
* "I Could View This Mesmerizing Verse A Thousand Times * My Dear Sweet, Blessed, Gifted & Beautiful Elizabeth * Never to Grow Tired Yet Merely More Enchanted * Aneath Its Beauty & Spellbinding Words * And Whom Would Never Love * Such Beauty * I Shall Too Be Around * To Read Every Word Which Pours From Your MAGNIFICENT * Beautiful Brush * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/10/2011 5:23:00 PM
I enjoyed this from start to finish. So smoth and poetic this piece is. A beautifully crated one by you the poet.
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Date: 11/5/2011 10:48:00 AM
I liked this poem a lot. But I was in love with the three last stanza.. You ignite my sleeping spirit of poet, Elizabeth.. Such an inspirational love poem. :)
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Date: 11/5/2011 8:35:00 AM
somehow you have incorporated matter of factness with expectancy and excitement at the prospect in the midst of nature's imagery. Very very interesting and unique Elizabeth !
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Date: 11/5/2011 1:04:00 AM
Hello my dear friend, this is the perfect poem for me to say thank you for keeping in touch while I've been doing battle with "the dark side." Return home was delayed and I've been focusing on music lately but so glad to hear from you and read this AMAZING piece of pure beauty coming from a true-blue poetry queen. Thanks for everything.
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Date: 11/4/2011 10:07:00 PM
Really a wonderful poem, Lizzy, you ought to enter this in the voicesnet contest, think it would be a winner.
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Date: 11/4/2011 1:33:00 PM
Enjoyed the concept, message and rhythm of your write Lizzie..
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Date: 11/4/2011 2:54:00 AM
Love the Rhythm, could be a song, the last stanza is a gem, shades of you no doubt. love this. harry
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Date: 11/3/2011 9:12:00 PM
Wonderful and interesting write. Your words are glittering like stars and really you have done it. Thanks for sharing. bl
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Date: 11/3/2011 11:44:00 AM
Amazing write...it seems the form of the poem is like Balassi stanza...(taking a break?)
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Date: 11/2/2011 11:12:00 PM
Elizabeth, I think this is one of your best. A joy to read to say the least. Well done. Rockman :-)
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Date: 11/2/2011 1:54:00 PM
Nice work Elizabeth. Enjoyed the read, and thanks for reading my poems.
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Date: 11/2/2011 11:52:00 AM
The end of the day is a very romantic time and a time to be enjoyed as you have so lovingly expressed in these verses.Enjoyed reading..Thanks for you kind review of my work..Yes, my son is living here temporarily, my grandson lives here and of course my husband so you guessed it..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:37:00 PM
beautiful as always, elizabeth.
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Date: 11/1/2011 4:29:00 PM
what a poem,,,it is so delightful,,,and it seems love is a touch worth waiting for,,,and maybe even waiting forever for.....
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Date: 11/1/2011 4:22:00 PM
Precious and eager on hesitant feet. May we all find a way to find love someday. Where we'll jump in with both of our feet. And know that it's love that came from above. When eachother, we finally meet.
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Date: 11/1/2011 3:11:00 PM
Another perfect expression, Liz. This piece would be wonderful set to music, but the music would have to be equal to the piece, and that would be so difficult. Love, daver
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Date: 11/1/2011 1:25:00 PM
You never cease to amaze me Your writing is so amazing It is a true God given gift After the reader stops reading And viewer stops breathing Because your words begin to uplift
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Date: 11/1/2011 1:06:00 PM
Oh my! This is fabulous, Elizabeth. So romantic and worded with creative imagery. You should enter it in the "erotic" contest. This is as much as I want to hear about a love relationship. Very tasteful and dreamy. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2011 12:17:00 PM
A lovely and heartfelt read. Excellently accomplished. Beautiful imagery flow through your verses. Thank you for sharing! And May God Bless!
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:24:00 AM
* “I Viewed This Your Beauties Wonderful Last Eve When I Was A Bit Fatigued * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth * As While Reading Its Pleasantry A Second Time * I Was Left With of Edgar A. Poe * This Most Probably Because of The Beatful Notes I Found Amid A Sweetened Rhyme * It Also Held Vines Which Reached Deeper Inside * Very Beautiful, Sweet Elizabeth * Let Us Find But A Golden Frame * Placed Amid the Wall In Faves * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:15:00 AM
I have found a little time and ambition to read some poetry today. I am pleased to have read yours Elizabeth as always. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2011 6:36:00 AM
beauty has coated my morning in your work. starlight relaxes....
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Date: 11/1/2011 6:21:00 AM
wonderful flow, and feeling...I hope you don't have to wait too long. Have a nice day..TAH
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