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Voyage To Land

"Evil ghost phase" passing Video game blues Friends not brightest To be human stirring within God popping in, out Weaving plan Ability to help others

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/4/2011 6:08:00 PM

Had to read this a couple of times to understand what you are trying to say. My conclusion is that you are expressing the 2 tendencies of a human, selfishness and the ability to live for others, which is quiet true. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Be well! Caroline.

James Foulk

Date: 3/31/2011 8:19:00 AM

this poem moved right along, a very creative piece of work.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2011 4:47:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Joshua. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol