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Volcanic Beauty

It’s cold and snowy, The volcano is asleep; The mountain is big.

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Abe Lopez

Date: 2/19/2009 2:12:00 PM

I wonder what will happen when the volcanoe erupts? great write!

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/8/2009 2:50:00 PM

Good haiku Danielle. Volcanoes and the weather can be nice. But I would be careful when it comes to volcanoes they can be very dangerous. Love Elizabeth

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/2/2009 5:09:00 PM

Great haiku Danielle, volcanos can be beautiful and yet very dangerous..................very nice

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/22/2009 7:01:00 AM

This is in excellent form and provides wonderful clear imagery. Michael

Date: 1/15/2009 7:38:00 PM

I can relate to the cold and snowy with temps in North Dakota dipping to -30 without wind chill factor. Interesting perspective in this concise poem. I just found out that you have a few relatives here at the Soup. It must be fun to share with such a creative family. Keep on writing. I hope you find joy in your words. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 5:06:00 PM

Great haiku Danielle, a volcano is dormant beauty...Raul