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Rain falls from blue erected sky. Optical illusions reply. Sun dance under a palm tree's shade with barefoot flights of sparkling jade. Smooth curves are shaped from image nigh. Sculpted clouds refract light on high through hazel kaleidoscope eyes. Love forms circles and dull lines fade Rain falls from blue. A starry jewel waves warm goodbyes on whispers of wind soft and shy. Full prism moons rise unafraid from bright mosaic visions made. A mirage on falcon's wing flies. Rain falls from blue.

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Date: 5/8/2017 9:13:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work shown on homepage..Congrats on being selected..Sara
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Date: 7/14/2012 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2012 4:15:00 PM
That 2nd stanza just takes my breath away...starry jewels of wind soft and shy...very suave! I am fav'n this one...so nice! Hope u are doing well, Rhonda. :) gwendolen
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:36:00 PM
Rhonda congrats on your win...love it..David
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Date: 6/28/2012 4:03:00 PM
Very poetic and creative work...Enjoyed reading this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/28/2012 10:59:00 AM
What a very beautiful and picturesque poem, Rhonda! I love your last line here! Hugs and thank you for passing by my poem :)
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Date: 6/28/2012 2:17:00 AM
A poem with quality Rhonda - beautiful. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/28/2012 12:43:00 AM
So amazingly beautiful:)
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Date: 6/27/2012 10:10:00 PM
Wonderful!!!
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Date: 6/27/2012 9:05:00 PM
This is a fabulous and incredible write! I just love blue sky showers! Great Work!!
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