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Visions Sight

The shadowed tinges of dreams Seem to float from present view Yet linger in the subconscious The images sometimes askew A fleeting memory remains When sun kisses morning sky The eyes still not in focus Yet an image refuses to die As the warmth of your soft pillow Still caresses your gentle cheek A vision floats before your eyes So vivid you dare not blink Gone now are shadowed dreams The night floated into your view They may linger in the subconscious But this vision for you remains true Debra Squyres 01/12/13

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Robert Johnson

Date: 1/16/2013 2:05:00 PM

So many times we lose the fight to capture thoughts that we don't write. Dawning dreams of magic dust. We breath it in, it turns to rust. An avalanche of slumber snow. Covers up what we no longer know. Thanks for the inspiration Debra. Great topic.

Debra Squyres
Date: 1/16/2013 2:35:00 PM

If you don't post this as a poem, you should get a quick kick in the backside !! Marvelous poetry you have formed here !!!

Daniel De Culla

Date: 1/14/2013 1:53:00 AM

Nice Poem. I enjoy Yrs. so much. Blessed Be¡

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/13/2013 9:35:00 AM

'The shadowed tinges or dreams'...Wow! I am fascinated by vivid dreams and have written about a few of mine...VERY well done, Debra - Tim

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/12/2013 6:46:00 PM

Nice one. I often get greams very vivid and so interesting that I write them down in a note book. Thnx for your comments!! Jag

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/12/2013 5:44:00 PM

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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/12/2013 6:06:00 PM

Thanks for your clarification on the poetry form. Now to give it a go lol Wish me luck..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2013 5:14:00 PM

Great rhythm and flow to this one..Enjoyed reading it..If for a contest, should be in the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/12/2013 4:44:00 PM

I have had several dreams that I have remembered right when I woke up only to have them fade after a while during the day! This is a spectacular write, an incredible write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful and amazing poem this evening! What a pleasing piece you have written here, I love poetry like this, it makes one think a little! Great Work!!

Gareth James

Date: 1/12/2013 4:25:00 PM

Lovely write, Debra. Soft and enjoyable