Vision's Flight

Soared to the heavens today
on wings that were not mine…

Feathered memories
held me aloft, suspended
with whispered words
heard on the calmness
of gentle breeze’s breath.
Clouds became the canvas
where dreams were painted… 
harmonious hues blended
with shadows bittersweet.
Welcomed on this flight
by the sun’s warming rays, 
and in the distance skies
the moon smiled with insight 
as stars gave up their visions.
The air itself seemed alive,
with the energy that is time,
as past, present and future
lost sequence and merged
to form soul’s completeness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/23/2012 6:05:00 AM
Wow Debra, magnificent poem!!!!Inspired writing ,it has a tranquil feeling reading it. Anne
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Date: 9/27/2012 10:37:00 AM
Hello Debra, just stopping by to read this again. It leaves me feeling very serene. Hope your having a good day. :)
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Date: 9/26/2012 6:35:00 AM
wow Debra, this is beautiful, a truly poetic gem...
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Date: 9/24/2012 4:52:00 AM
Had to read it one more time. Just beautiful Deb. It's like I swallowed a ball of warm light. Worth the wait!
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Date: 9/24/2012 4:47:00 AM
Wow Debra, you take the rhyme out and you create such amazing imagery. This is so in touch with the ethereal sense of life. It is very moving. What's in that swamp water down there. :) Enjoyed very much. Will be coming back to this one. Take Care.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 9/24/2012 9:08:00 AM
Well thank you my friend !! Appreciate your support with my writings. "Vision's Flight" is my attempt to put in words what I'm trying to do in my life. Merge the past with today and the future to come. Take care yourself !!
Date: 9/24/2012 4:39:00 AM
:):):):) That's me smiling because you finally posted another poem. Now I have to read it. :)
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