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~VISION~

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~VISION~

~VISION~

Way in to my vision
I can see it all over again! 
What once has left me,
has found my soul again.
My life has hit the boiling point of hot!
All my decisions have been put to a side to rot.
Is this my only destiny?
Nothing can make it stop!
Is this my only mission?
Is my life set on self destruct?
What happen to the passion?
Nothing can make it stop!
No one can hear my cries!
No one can pick my heart up from drop.
Around me everything dies!
Everything turns black and white,
only in my eyes.
I will now sacrifice,
the last purity of my life.
In this world made up of lies!
I have no need to want to survive.

The bad thoughts taunt me.
Only with visions I see!
I want this goodness to let me be!
I have no desire to feel alive.
I have no desire to understand.
I want all the love motions to go away.
I want nothing in my hand.
Only the five things created by my land.
I will torment these feelings I hide,
while I'm holding on to the other side.
WHO NEEDS DEPRESSION ALL OVER AGAIN?

       BY,I.T.
SKAT POETRY
Dec-24-2008

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  1. Date: 6/21/2014 2:27:00 AM
    Beautiful write.

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 9:03:00 AM
    SKAT A very dark and deep write. The pain and torture you are feeling is clearly written and understood. Sending you some love and hugs to make it all better. Thanks for the great comment on my Abuse poem.

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 2:11:00 PM
    I LOVE THE DRAMA OF YOUR POEM

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:14:00 PM
    soupmail.

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 10:08:00 AM
    A very heartfelt write making it an extremely wonderful & outstanding masterpiece my dearest friend & sis, Skat! You're highly creative, too. Kudos and big hugs to you! Thank you so much for sharing it with me tonight & your nice comments on my latest poem. Have a blessed weekend to you and your family/ love ones!. Thanks a lot again! love much 4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 8:29:00 AM
    Very emotional and well expressed. Thank you Skat!

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 9:30:00 AM
    Vision is excellently adorned in golden ways depicting a beautiful image of many unsolved mystery of life. It's call WOW! Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 5:08:00 AM
    perfect dramatic verse.

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Very deep emotive work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 5:41:00 PM
    People are so afraid to talk about these types of emotions and as a result plummet further into the darkness. Excellent poem about a very relevant topic. Well done SKAT

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:05:00 AM
    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 12:45:00 AM
    this me me think of the things we know that will destruct as but continue to do so...the pleasure is just overwhelming...love this skat...^_^ v

  1. Date: 10/11/2010 4:16:00 PM
    i can dig it to my grave

  1. Date: 10/6/2010 8:52:00 AM
    Depression is a dark shadow that robs us of our joy and inspiration.... I appreciate your honesty in this piece. So many of us know this struggle.

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 9:26:00 PM
    Just dropping by to say hi today! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 8:44:00 PM
    I like this deep thought provoking piece. A great write. Thanks for your kind comments.

  1. Date: 10/2/2010 12:47:00 PM
    well spoken and well written just so well done thanks for all your kind comments and have a great weekend faleshia

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 5:56:00 PM
    ain't nobody needs that Skat ! And I hope it will spare you!

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 7:56:00 PM
    nicely said!!!, who needs it lol, cool write mom, =(^.^)=baby skat

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 10:56:00 AM
    So deeply felt and emotional write, SKAT! I do hope that you are in a better mood after having written this Dramatic Verse! Great write! And thank you for commenting "After Sunrise". Have a nice Sunday!...Love, Gert

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