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Visable

A look in the mirror, there one can see They are not invisible, not a piece a debris A look in the mirror, is all it takes You are a person as real as those aches The aches one can feel, when another diminishes you The aches you can not see, when someone truly hurts you You are you, I am me, we are both visible Now let them see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/24/2011 9:12:00 PM
Superb! The writing is very clean & the flow is gentle.
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Date: 7/23/2011 10:03:00 PM
I really enjoyed your work, vert well put together
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