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Viper Viper

Viper like she slowly slid her tongue into his mouth
Startled he recoiled, but then he tasted honey sweet
The warmth of her fiery body pressed against his
And her arms coiled around his waist seductively erotically
He was lost in a world of memory and what should have been
He had remembered her taste for years to come
Would she ever return in the dark black steamy night
Driving him insane, arousing his every single pore
Or was she just his fantasy this black dark sensuous viper
That slithered across his bed and left him desiring more. 

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  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:49:00 AM
    Would she ever return? That is my question, will I ever find love,romance , dedication, passion, the dream. Will it ever return without being mared by realities of not need but want, not love but acting, not passion but. playing. My lost virginity I feel it now.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 3:17:00 PM
    Inspiration found in strange places Lizzie, what a sensual way to slither into someone's heart. A beauty my Aussie friend! :)

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:07:00 AM
    Wow, cold shower time!! Lovely piece of warmth. Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Oooo la la!! Terry

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 4:09:00 AM
    Very good Lizzie. - Have a beautiful new week! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)