Vicious Game

Out the door is a vicious game a process battle of spite tug of war circus of irritation where nobody loses no one wins a bloody senseless draw no referee only stiff jabs right crosses haymakers countered by blow after blow low...

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/10/2012 8:12:00 PM

Okies the verse above is an observation..NOW do more make it have a more pronounced beginning CLIMAX and end...[LOL ..aww I don't know who he is and now I must google him!Lawrence Ferlinghetti, the City Lights Poetry King!] light & love

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/7/2012 9:45:00 AM

I really enjoyed this write JSLambert(what's a name I can call you?)! Don't you just hate draws? I haven't heard of haymakers for many many years, wow, great place to use it here!! Great write, Awesome Work!!