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Vibes Within

Endless thoughts, Sending vibes to my stomach. Unmistakeable demands, Finding their way to victory. Hope being handed to me, As you walked into my life. Countless days, Skimming right by. I seek this moment, More and More. Knowing your mine, A smile stealing my expression. Patenting down the sorrows, Stealing my misery, Oh so you did. Over-whelmed with the feeling, That trickles down through my stomach. Nature catching the surplus of happiness, Calming down my senses. You gave me everything I need, For maybe, This shall last.

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Date: 11/8/2011 8:40:00 AM
* “Tis A Very Soothing & Beautiful Image of Thought * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Cali * Grasping Loves Tangible Wind * As A Breath to Instill In Ones Heart * Very Beautiful & Thank You * For Your Beauties Lovely Visit * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 10/12/2011 2:57:00 PM
a lot of vibes int his poem..loving it ....very simply and beautiful at the same time..great work amego
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Date: 9/29/2011 9:20:00 AM
I am very happy to have been able to read your poetry today Cali. I do not have a lot of words to comment on it but I want you to know I did read it. Every poem as with every poet has a different meaning and I do not wish to misinterpert your poetry. I do love reading poetry here and I get inspiration from others poetry which enables me to write new poetry myself. There are lots of wonderful people who give great comments here and I hope they all read your poetry and comment. Love, Carol
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