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Venomous Vampires Rule The Night

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Venomous Vampires Rule The Night

Darkened eyes that pull you in
Fangs hidden under a grin
That are sharp pointy and long
They have powers that are strong
No escaping from their bite
They hunt in the darkest night
Once they find you it's all done
There's nowhere to hide or run
In their nest is where you'll stay
Your humanity will slip away
As your necks used as a treat
Just give in there's no defeat
From these creatures very scary
Making you so weak and weary
Injecting you with poison venom
Turning you into a demon
That invades your inner soul
You have just lost all control
Of the person you once were
Your past life is now a blur
As this poison starts to act
In the night you will attack
Searching for someone to be
Added to this family
Hungry fangs are coming out
Blood is dripping down your mouth
Your stronger with every drop
There is no way you can stop
Addictions starting to set in
Another victims claimed again

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  1. Date: 8/30/2014 1:54:00 AM, amazing! This actually really helped me because I'm supposed to write a poem on vampires and I couldn't think of what to do and when I saw this it gave me some ideas. (Don't worry, I won't copy anything from it). :D

  1. Date: 4/15/2014 7:59:00 AM
    Feeling like Bram Stoker is alive. Congrats on the win, robin

  1. Date: 4/15/2014 7:37:00 AM
    Excellent rhyme form, loved your entry, congrats on your win Robin xxx

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:31:00 PM
    way to go, Sweet Pea. A great entry and win in the vampire contest.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:59:00 AM
    Scary, well done Robin xx

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Great descriptive lines. Congrats on the win :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 1:30:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Robin

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 6:24:00 PM
    I think this conveyed better than anything the feeling hat all animals must have, as they surrender to death when attacked by that which is more powerful than they can resist. Well written. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 5:15:00 PM
    You captured the theme perfectly. Congratulations Robin

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Very dark and very gothic! I loved it! Great flow to your words here and nice rhymes, too. This is an amazing entry for this contest, Robin! I wish you the best of luck!...Thank you for the great comments. I appreciate it very much! :)

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 3:56:00 PM
    Well done on this write Robin, A very enjoyable read...Peter