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Velvet Minds

One more hot, deserted and silent road
I have chosen this path in life
This lonely domain of thinkers
Some neurotic, some shy, some bold-

Rare do I find those who belong 
in this domain-
When we do cross paths a jubilant solemnization
it is-
Only once in a silver raindrop does this happen
Share words and ideas- never anything to explain

As our velvet minds are then one

We sway, sing and dance with the trees
And wood nymphs only we can see- so rare
Fires burn bright- we travel to and beyond the heavens in one night
All under an orange moon, phantoms of Thinkers past, waltzing
with a slow seacoast breeze

Inside my mind I feel velvet
A delicate, downy cushion brushing my lobes
That feeling is like breathing fresh air for the first time
A sentience angels would covet-

As our velvet minds are then one

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  1. Date: 4/30/2014 9:12:00 PM
    AMY, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3

  1. Date: 4/26/2014 7:09:00 PM
    I remember this one. It's so creative. Congrats on the winners list!

  1. Date: 4/26/2014 8:30:00 AM
    Beautiful...where velvety words bring a feeling of belonging. congrats on a fine win. // paul

  1. Date: 4/26/2014 1:17:00 AM
    Amy, stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. if ya like:) ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 5:48:00 PM
    nicely done Amy

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 10:07:00 PM
    what a lovely thought, velvet minds that become one. This is swimming with imagery!! wonderful.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 7:20:00 AM
    This poem is going in my fav book it is entitled "The Wild Winds That Blow" there you go you now mussed up my hair and raised my senses, thank you, hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:03:00 AM
    Its amazing to be able to let go widout need to explain.Beautiful write