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Vd Does Not Stand For Valentine's Day

I picked my broken heart up off the floor From where you threw it, pursuing that whore I sewed it up Without your love Hoping a VD would soon even the score! 1/27/12

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Painted Hunter

Date: 2/18/2013 6:58:00 AM

I love your sense of humor...congrats on the win!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/17/2013 5:09:00 PM

Congrats, Susan. Nice going. xxxRalph

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2013 5:06:00 AM

- A unique Valentines poem, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, B.E.S. !! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 2/17/2013 2:28:00 AM

good one...congratulations...

Len Gasun

Date: 2/16/2013 10:48:00 PM

Congratulations my dear friend Susan for your heartfelt write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

Joseph May

Date: 2/16/2013 6:04:00 PM

congrats on your win Susan

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2013 4:42:00 PM

Now that was a surprise! To funny, congrats. I like your twist.

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/16/2013 4:39:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2013 3:34:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/16/2013 3:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2013 2:14:00 PM

ha ha Funny Susan, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and umumum poem. always & forever *LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/14/2012 10:55:00 AM

So cute this is!! Congratulations on your win!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/14/2012 7:17:00 AM

LOL....we all have that hope when betrayed. Excellent limerick...congrats on your win!

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/14/2012 6:34:00 AM

LOL...good time a day,girl!!! Congratulations on your win!! I have seen the expressions of the recipients of those who have to receive the very large needles full of quite viscous and painfully absorbed medicine of which I had the pleasure of administering...LOL...to some that probably could have written your poem!! LOL...Good one!! big hugs,Cuz...love,deb

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/14/2012 5:52:00 AM

Now that's MY KIND OF HUMOR!!! Pick an STD; any one...or 2!!! ha ha...Congrats Susan. As tho you heart were disposable, right?...NOT!!!! lOVE, gWENDOLEN

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2012 10:28:00 PM

Susan, wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/13/2012 10:16:00 PM

super congrats on a first plade win Susan luv..

Jack Horne

Date: 2/15/2012 1:45:00 PM

LOL, love it - I just had to read this one, Susan.

Riekie Briel

Date: 2/4/2012 4:05:00 PM

Cool beans and right to the point with such female passion and zest. I like when I find your straight arrow poems, because I think you do well in this manner of writing. Good.