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Valentine Morning

My drowsy eyes turn to wander Where window gazing, finds a crescent moon Rifting the darkness, and against it's light A magnolia branch is stenciled, black and keen Three stars are tangled in the topmost bough... And because deep loveliness is there, I turn to you... You lay in half light As the fringe of dawn approaches Breeze stirs the sheer lace curtains Our room is infused with crimson hues I’m wishing you might soon awaken But you are sleeping soundly With such contentment It seems all the worry lines Have disappeared from your face Your legs are tangled In the softness of the sheets Your familiar hand now lies Gently on my waist The profile on the pillow Is that boy from long ago I love watching you Your lashes are fluttering What are you dreaming, my love? How could one explain That a love like this exists Before coffee, on a Thursday morning in a shadowed room? ...................................... PD's Contest: Any Valentine Will Do By Carrie Richards 9/26/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/17/2013 4:44:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Well earned win. Thanks for your kind comment. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/17/2013 4:47:00 AM
- A lovely Valentines poem, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, CARRIE !! - Have a beautifully Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2013 9:43:00 PM
Congratulations my dear friend Carrie for your very lovely write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/16/2013 6:30:00 PM
wonderful write Carrie....congrats on your win
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Date: 2/16/2013 5:24:00 PM
Congrats on your awesome win Carrie. - Connie
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:26:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your win with this lovely, romantic poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:20:00 PM
This is a wonderful slice of joy, well done!
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Date: 2/16/2013 3:45:00 PM
Right up there in the top where you should be XXOOO Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/16/2013 3:02:00 PM
: ) Beautiful! Congratulations on a very fine win, Carrie! Enjoy your weekend!
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Date: 2/16/2013 2:10:00 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 9/29/2011 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations onn the win in the contest of P.D., Carrie
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on another grand win with this fantastic poetry luv.. great enlightening words luv..
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:20:00 AM
CARRIE~~Congratulations on your posted poem of the week. God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 9/29/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Your Best Poem this Week" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2011 9:56:00 PM
Yes, a really dreamy poem oozing soft sensuality. congratulations on your deserved win Carrie. cheers Margaret
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Date: 9/27/2011 4:20:00 PM
how could one indeed? perhaps the magnolia holds the secret? Beauty write, Carrie, congrats! Namaste~N
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Date: 9/27/2011 4:09:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on first place win with this fantastic entry for the contest luv..
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. Lovely poem and rated right up there where it should be. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:12:00 PM
A fine write and a lovely gift to a dear one. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:01:00 PM
What a great win you have here in Nette's "Soft Sensuality contest, congratulations Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Carrie
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:31:00 AM
Loved this. My guess is you have a winner here. Good luck in the contest.
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