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Vacuum Cleaner

Red furry vacuum silently goes across the floor
Consuming dropped homemade southern biscuit
Then looks up with sad eyes beggin'  for more
  

Just for fun!!

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2013

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Robin Davis Date: 6/16/2014 9:02:00 AM Sara This is fun and silly. A vacuum cleaner that gives puppy dog eyes for scraps. LOL Thank you for the nice comment on my Block Party poem. Login to Reply

Kathryn Collins Date: 1/19/2013 10:15:00 AM like it Sara. My vacuum is being starved in the closet. love, Kathy Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 1/16/2013 8:48:00 PM cute ;} have a great day Sara,,,your name always reminds me of "Sera's Smile by Hall n Oats,,, you can watch it on utube ;} Login to Reply

Vesna Kovrlija Date: 1/15/2013 3:27:00 AM Very sweet and original! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 1/14/2013 4:08:00 PM I know people who would act the same way if a delicious biscuit fell on the floor. Good three lines. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 1/14/2013 3:17:00 PM Ha ha, this is quite the humorous write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 1/14/2013 2:47:00 PM i like it! great comparison... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/14/2013 2:36:00 PM hmmm, to me, I am thinking you are describing a pet dog?? Hope I guessed right! very cute idea. Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 1/14/2013 1:32:00 PM Sara, what a cute post. I have 2 such vacuums.. They can stare a hole thru you... hehehe.......l Jake Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 1/14/2013 12:39:00 PM How adorable! Lovely write, Sara. Must drop more of those southern biscuits! ;) Login to Reply

Irfana Ali Bhat Date: 1/14/2013 11:49:00 AM hehehehehe...i could picture that sad looking vacuum cleaner...power of ur words...:))) Login to Reply

Terry O'Leary Date: 1/14/2013 10:50:00 AM Well, it was fun, Sara! Terry (Unfortunately, mine gets 'fed up' pretty quickly...) Login to Reply

Debra Squyres Date: 1/14/2013 10:43:00 AM Brought a chuckle and a big smile...what a fun write !! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2013 10:42:00 AM Yes......sad eyes... but cute, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 1/14/2013 10:16:00 AM lol, a sad little Princess : ) l had a chuckle here Login to Reply