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Vacation

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Below is the poem entitled Vacation which was written by poet Annalise a.k.a. Audrey Haick . Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Vacation

Mother Father kids
Brainstorm vacation voyage
Car railway or plane

Entry in Brian's "Poetry of the Noun-Haiku" Contest

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  1. Date: 1/29/2010 7:09:00 PM
    Hey here is one of yours I'd missed. I really like it! As for my email, it's wordwarrior55@hotmail.com. Hope you'll write me there so I can get yours! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 6:46:00 PM
    While im not this type of writer at all, people who do have a taste for these cant get quite deep. I respect it. I feel like...no matter where or how you get there, or your dream or aspirations everyone comes from the same process. Your kinda great.

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 11:27:00 PM
    Well done, Audrey. Isn't this Haiku form fun?...and challenging!

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 12:00:00 PM
    Family vacations I'll never forget. Especially my constantly asking, "Are we there yet?" Great Write Audrey. Best Wishes Always, Bill

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 11:21:00 PM
    May I join you in your vacation ? :) Promising fun for the family. Good luck in Brian's contest. Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 5:18:00 PM
    action packed vacation Haiku with no action verbs! Cool! like it alot! -Robert

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 4:53:00 PM
    Real good one, Audrey. Best wishes in Brian's contest and thank you for once again sharing your amazing poetic talent. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 1/18/2010 10:58:00 AM
    Love this...good luck in the contest...Marty

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 11:40:00 PM
    Thank you for supporting my contest Audrey.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 7:28:00 PM
    WOW is all I can say Audrey.. great entry for the contest... hard to think of writing without certain words especially verbs... u have a winner here... so good to say hi for a few minutes before I get back to the trial this coming week... hope it will be over by this Friday and then I will return to Soup full time again.... great hearing from u .. so good to know my friends still think of me even when I am limited to comment on all their beautiful poetry .. this one has my vote... talk soon luv

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 2:26:00 PM
    Kool Haiku Audrey, good luck in Brian's contest >> Soup Mail 4 u >> James

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 1:33:00 PM
    This new one ain't easy , but you have done really well . Now how do we keep those kids quiet ; are we there yet ; are we there yet ; are we there yet ?????? . best of luck in the contest , Audrey ....

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 1:26:00 PM
    Good luck with this entry in Brian's contest. Sounds like it should be in the winner's circle. Sara

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 1:20:00 PM
    I have not seen this contest, I will check it out.