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Vacancy

In the pitch of midnight black a shining The stitch of an illusory lining Weary traveler opines, where is my place? The eyes go towards well-lit grace Sheer magnitude of emptiness and yet Rooms-a-plenty past midnight's rest Lost, the traveler mused, where is my place? The eyes go towards well-lit grace But shines a little longer this shining Ever so present in the illusory lining Robust a light for all to see this Shining bright, refulgent bliss In that dark of midnight black scarred lie A star, like a pearl in the sky The traveler sings, there, that is my place Found vacancy in well-lit grace _______________________________ By: Tim B on 04/18/2012 Written for: Russell Sivey's contest "Midnight Pearl"

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Date: 4/24/2012 7:43:00 AM
Beautifully written verses.
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Date: 4/19/2012 3:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this contest entry...Reads like an winner to me..Interesting the progression of the work..Very creative..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I liked your humor ad reasoning about the use of the word asinine...Sara
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Date: 4/19/2012 1:35:00 PM
Well done for the contest and a joy to read.
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Date: 4/19/2012 11:55:00 AM
this charms me no end, tim... what a graceful train of images unconventionally conceived.. best wishes and huggs! :)
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Date: 4/19/2012 8:41:00 AM
The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2012 9:53:00 PM
This is a truly awesome poem.Great write my friend.
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