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Upon Dropping Myself (An Accident)

Not enslaved to the flow of time; no peril yet for careless hands. sealed and complete, I picture it off the floor, a fragile capsule packed with gallons of linoleum spite. to burn with it the miles up between us and flight - but gravity, gravity paves a path to nearest harbor; the egg lands on the catch of my palm’s bomb-hatch, wingless. defused. a message maydayed to me: are you tethered to the merest tock? threatened by the slightest flick of wind?

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Date: 1/19/2009 1:41:00 AM
The manner of the layout in this is excellent. there is a feeling of rap about this with all the like-sounding words. The, seemingly, jerishness to the poem give the narrative a strong form to run with. The imagery ('crumb-crazed pigeons' for example) is excellent in portraying a feeling of frenzy thatr is the aftermath of an accident. Strong and confident writing.
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Date: 1/17/2009 3:21:00 PM
LOL! The last verse is brilliant! :-D
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