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Upon a Pool of Water

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Upon a Pool of Water

Upon a pool of water, a blue cast Shown with a dark island in the middle The deep misty lake that surrounds will last As seen the life-force for the world’s riddle Pond of the bluest blue portrays so fast The island answering the eye’s tittle Beauty that is condensed for all to see The blue iris showers joy something free
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 3:56:00 PM
    another beauty here, my friend. Hope you're doing well and having a great week

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 10:37:00 AM
    the fluidity of this piece astounds, russsell.. you create an array of soothing wordpalys that make this work shine!... greeat stuff, my friend!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 6:12:00 AM
    - Beautiful Russell, I will get to enjoy your aromatic pool (free) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 3:52:00 PM
    this is very pretty. I love poems with blue in them.

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 3:50:00 PM
    An appropriate poem to be reading this rainy day, love water and love your poem too, xxx

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 3:20:00 PM
    Interesting work..Is it for a contest?...The Iris is such a beautiful flower..Sara

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 2:24:00 PM
    A beautiful refreshing pool of water with matching heavenly phrases... I am refreshed :)