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Up Where It Belongs

Strewn by knitted spines and a tail, with ribbons on its hair, bright flowing visions hover along an azure sky. Gracefully, the flight takes a diamond shape as if to roam away in some twirling prance. And as it slowly faded from sight, the little boy on the beach giggled and tugged the braided loop calling his paper wing, “ Come back; I’ll have to pull you in.” But it waved on like an entranced sail kissing the clouds; till near dusk marked the rising moon…quietly, he rested on the sand to gaze at the breezy sky again; this time a bit aware the kite he handmade and loved won’t come back… for it is up above where its home belongs. ~ New Year Premiere Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/6/2018 11:04:00 AM
Lovely. Love the child's perspective. Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 1/6/2018 3:55:00 AM
What a sweet story Nette! Congratulations on your fifth placement!
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Date: 9/1/2016 12:46:00 AM
Lovely write, with a lovely truth, nette. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 8/31/2016 6:17:00 PM
Hi Nette, This was a delightful tale with a good moral. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/31/2016 2:52:00 PM
What a great lesson of knowing when to let go.Congrats Nette!
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Date: 8/31/2016 12:45:00 PM
Touching. Very beautiful (I flew many kites in my day). Congrats! :-)
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Date: 1/20/2014 5:15:00 AM
Your skills at the usage of metaphor and similes are amazing. Great piece of writing!
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Date: 8/14/2013 4:05:00 AM
LOVE this gem Nette...Your description of the kite in the first part, then the boy flying it, concluding with that wonderful last line all in the shape of a kite!...Congrats my friend - Tim
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Date: 8/13/2013 9:47:00 AM
congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish
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Date: 8/11/2013 4:33:00 PM
A very breezy and picturesque poem. Well done. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/11/2013 2:42:00 PM
Nette, love it ....... congratulations!!! Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/11/2013 6:31:00 AM
Good morning Nette, CONGRATULATIONS''' Thank you for the lovely entry.:-) When you have time enjoy the winners and my sweet blog * Called "The Liberty Bell" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15780&PoetID=18720 Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... PS... stop by my newest poem if you like. "Summer Rain" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=498166 XOX-love Linda
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Date: 4/22/2012 6:19:00 PM
Lovely, light and whimsical piece. Well thought out and well constructed. Havent heard from you since you reviewed Awe Shucks. I have another one for you that I think you will get a kick out of called Vexation . I warn you it is unusual.
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Date: 4/19/2012 6:23:00 PM
To my fav's ;) from one sky dancer to another ! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2012 9:52:00 PM
A wonderful journey with your Kite and congratulations on your winning nette xx
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Date: 4/16/2012 3:19:00 PM
Warm wishes on the winning placement here Nette..)
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations Nette!! on your win...what a lovely piece here! Very well done...big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/15/2012 6:10:00 PM
A Hallmark-like moment as boy and kite say their goodbyes, Nette. The 3 judge panel was wow'd by the wording and the boy's reconciling tho'ts...Yes, the kite was where it wanted to be! So delighted to find out that you wrote this one! Spectacular scene! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/12/2012 12:33:00 AM
Congrats Nette on your win. Keep the good work up
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Date: 4/11/2012 11:45:00 AM
Nette......congrats on the placement in the contest.....~sashi.
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Date: 4/11/2012 11:44:00 AM
Nette......congrats on the placement in the contest.....~sashi.
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Date: 4/11/2012 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "April Poem" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2012 12:03:00 AM
Nette, thank you for your wonderful entry... CONGRATULATIONS~ ;-) ALWAYS *PD
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Date: 4/9/2012 10:44:00 AM
Wonderful expression of image where one is and from where he belongs. Loved always, bl
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