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A perky woman stepped inside The elevator car. I’d never seen her, so her words To me were quite bizarre. She turned her back to me and asked (Formalities she’d skipped) If I would help her out because Her dress was not quite zipped. Of course, I hastened to comply – I guess she couldn’t reach – But in the rules of etiquette, I think this was a breach. For asking someone’s help to dress Seems much more apropos If assistance comes from somebody You actually know!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/8/2013 3:45:00 PM
What if she would have been grumpy. :) Just a thought. :) Well, it gave you a topic to write about. Enjoyed! :)
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Date: 5/8/2013 9:31:00 AM
This was quite charming to read. I can only imagine the awkwardness of it all. :)
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Date: 5/8/2013 6:52:00 AM
Love it, and love Bob's comment on helping a guy..lol. BG
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