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Untouched moments

Majestic wetlands 
Reflecting tenuous limps 
Under a blue quilt 

Inspired by Raul Moreno’s “Tranquility” contest ! 

Copyright © Laura Mckenzie

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  1. Date: 4/7/2011 10:40:00 AM
    Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Laura. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 6:04:00 AM
    Inspirational Haiku Laura, and well deserved of it's win in Raul's contest >> James

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 4:11:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Laura. I hope you are having a wonderful inspiration filled weekend and wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 2:04:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tranquility" Contest, Laura!! ENjoy! Peace, AUdrey

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 1:50:00 PM
    Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. an amazing write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy ...luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 12:44:00 PM
    Congratulations, Laura! Already commented on this poem and am glad to see you in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 12:26:00 PM
    Hooray for you Laura!! I knew this was a winner when first read it! Congratulations! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 12:14:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win--a very nicely detailed Haiku. Chris.

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 11:56:00 AM
    Laura, congratulation in placing 3rd in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 9:50:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest. A nice imagination.

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 6:07:00 PM
    Majestic is a very creative word. I have never read it in a Haiku. I love haikus . Me and my daughter and son are trying them out at work. This is a very good one .

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 5:43:00 PM
    Great descriptive write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 5:01:00 PM
    Oh how lovely Laura .. what a perfect piece for the photo..good luck in Raul's contest.. as far as my Pendulum.. appreciate your kudos and maybe u will have a contest where I can enter it? does it pass the form test? thankxxx ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 4:22:00 PM
    very nice!!!

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 4:09:00 PM
    Love the line about the tenuous limbs, Laura. Nice interpretation of the photo. Best wishes in the contest. Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 4:04:00 PM
    Love this....each line could be a winning poem or monoku!! Love this! :)