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Until Death

Your hair so black
Your skin so pale
This contrast of things 
Make my heart sail

When ever i see you
My heart skips a beat
Time appears to slow
My mind even fails

Skin like a dolls
So soft and tender
Makes my heart surrender
and my eyes how they wail

My love is endless
our spirits are free
Untill my own body's
Stiff as a nail

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  1. Date: 1/16/2010 4:42:00 PM
    Terrific imagery-- ~Skyy

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 1:35:00 PM
    Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week >> James

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 10:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :0)

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 4:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Cameron. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 1:22:00 AM
    Cameron, Beautiful example of IambicPentameter. Congratulations on this feature of the week and thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 2:19:00 PM
    Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 12:17:00 PM
    Cameron - many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette