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Until Death

Your hair so black Your skin so pale This contrast of things Make my heart sail When ever i see you My heart skips a beat Time appears to slow My mind even fails Skin like a dolls So soft and tender Makes my heart surrender and my eyes how they wail My love is endless our spirits are free Untill my own body's Stiff as a nail

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Date: 1/16/2010 4:42:00 PM
Terrific imagery-- ~Skyy
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:35:00 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :0)
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Cameron. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:22:00 AM
Cameron, Beautiful example of IambicPentameter. Congratulations on this feature of the week and thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/10/2010 2:19:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:17:00 PM
Cameron - many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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