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Until

The day is only to dusk
Flowing away for you and me
They is never anything to ask
Because... you and I are both free

Did you forget about yourself?
Because of what I tell you to?
Have you a certainty you forgot to tell?
If only I knew

And the authority spoke its words
We who do not know did not know
Have you heard?
There is nothing to show...

I did not remember until I want to
I did not forget yet I’ve forgotten
Have I what it takes to be new?
Trying?... aren’t we all broken?

The night is only to dawn
Simply waiting for time be free
And have we ourselves to belong?
When there belongs a you and me?

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 1:39:00 AM
    Joel, a well-written poem, which I really like. - Have a relaxing and pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 11/23/2012 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne, you have a great weekend as well:D